Question for any wordsmiths

[Faster horses]

I like either one that you came up with, nr.

Soapweed? Soapweed? Are you still trying to figure this out?

S O A P W E E D, where are you?

[nr]

Question is, why is Soapeweed consulting us when he rides
with the Guru of Poetry (Saddletramp)?

[the_jersey_lilly_2000]

I wondered that myself. He does so well all the time.

I almost didnt reply at all, ya know how I put words together........haha they come out how they come out, whether they fit together or not......LOL

[MsSage]

I would add my comment but I am NOT english major LOL
I do hope that the mountians your talking about is neither Augustine or Spurr. Both are ready for eruption.

awe and wall go real well togther. Thinking the gnatt is cute

[Big Muddy rancher]

[Been There]

How about just simply "We were held enthralled"

[Soapweed]

Thanks for all the help. I was in a hurry, so decided to be a redneck and go with the gnat on the bathroom wall because that's about the way I felt up there. Believe me, those mountains are huge, the biggest in the world from where they start to where they end.

I guess I'm perfectionist enough that to me "enthrall" rhymes with "tall", but "enthralled" doesn't. Same with with "awe", it doesn't rhyme with "tall". On the other hand, even though it's not spelled the same "bawl" does rhyme with "tall". Believe it or not, I'm still in a hurry so we'll be seein' "y'all". Toodle-doo.

[Silver]

......enthralled were we all

[hometowngurl]

How about ..... and I thought that I would tip over and fall.