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Have a go at this (if ya dare)!!

zephyrus31

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Hi all, was surfing around for some poetry and found some (of the morbid kind) but hey, it's fun to try!! Judge for yourselves guys:

www.deadlounge.com/poetry/

Here are some I made earlier :roll:

righteous hatred

what have you ruined?
a black cloud of betrayal as memories darken.
once we were together in paradise,
innocent and virginal,
but your desire drifted away.
a clouded vision of lies -
memories follow darkness, follow death,
love burnt to ashes.
in a storm of hatred,
i still love you.

Darkness Descends

the night falls with a silent sigh, cold and alone are we.
the emotion for which you lust
flares once, then dies,
taken by your obsession.
all hope must surely perish.

your heart desires no more.
how could you not understand?
spirits surround us, crying,
sanctuary.

:gag: OK, that was kinda creepy..
 

cert

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Think I'll stick to reading Soapweed's on the front page here.
Zephyrus the link to good poetry is:
http://ranchers.net/soapweed/
 

Chuckie

Well-known member
well, zeph, my baby girl says we're all too old and boring, and don't have a clue as to what teenagers go thru "these days" . but i have to tell ya--she has been known to read my posts and their replies when it suits her purposes...figure THAT :)
 

zephyrus31

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Haha!! Chuckie, the youth of today secretly love their old folks, even though they cringe at admitting it.. :wink: Now you know your daughter loves you more than ever, (with the reading of your posts) and that's so sweet!! :heart:
 

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