That was very well done, leanin' H. We are having a writer's group get-together at our ranch this coming Sunday, September 20th. It starts at noon, with dinner furnished, and we will all share writings on "childhood memories." With your permission, I'd feel honored to read this poem and of course give you credit for writing it. The other participants would very much take an interest and become emotionally involved with this sad happening, and it sure qualifies as a childhood memory.
Anyone who would like to come and join us at this get-together would be more than welcome to attend.