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Tears, and a poem.

gcreekrch

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A childhood mentor of mine passed on 3 weeks ago due to complications following repair on a ruptured aorta. He was 80. I asked the family if I could recite a poem at his memorial and they accepted. Due to my lack of creativity in prose, I asked Baxter Black and Co. if I could borrow a poem of his and change a few names and places. They gladly gave me permission as long as credit for the main poem went to the author.

Thanks again Cindy Lou, Vicky, and Baxter.

Rest in Peace, Dale Valburg.



Somewhere deep in the old man's eyes a mem'ry took a'hold.
It fought the ageless undertow that drains and mocks the old.
I wiped a dribble off his chin, "Pop, tell me what you see?"
"It's all the boys I rode with, I think they've come for me."

.Unconsciously I checked the door, "It's nothin' but the wind.
You better try and git some rest, tomorrow we'll go in."
"Is that you, Phil? I can't quite see. Yer mounted might well.
You never rode a horse that good when we were raisin' hell."

"Lie down, old man. There's no one here." "No, wait, that looks like Jerry.
He helped me put ol' Red to sleep. Why, hell, he even cried.
Now don't forget to check the salt, them cows'll drift back down.
Well, I'll be damned, there's Gunderson , he ranched here on the Horsefly.

"When I bought in to buckaroo…But that's been fifty years."
The old man squinched his rheumy eyes, I dabbed away the tears.
The boss had told me he was old, had seen a lot of springs.
I bet ya if you peeled his bark, you'd count near eighty rings.

We'd rode the last three summers here together on the rim.
Just he and I, for puncher's pay. I'd learned a lot from him.
But now I'm settin' by his bed, uncertain what to do.
I ain't no good at nursin' coots. I'm only twenty-two.

"I reckon that I'm ready now. My friends are set to go.
They've got an extra mount cut out that's just for me, I know."
"You've got to stop this foolish talk! You shouldn't overdo!
Pop, all you need's a good night's sleep. You'll be as good as new."

"Don't make it complicated, kid, cut a pal some slack.
The saddle on that extra horse…that's my ol' weathered kak.
I'm comin', Phil, I'll be right there," He winked a misty eye
And tried to reach up for his hat, then died without a sigh.

I'll tellya, man, it freaked me out! I dang near come in two!
I'd never watched a person die, especially one I knew.
I tried to say a little prayer but all I knew was grace.
So I just said, "Good Bye, Old Man." and covered up his face.

I poured myself the bitter dregs and stood out on the step.
Alone I listened to the night, as still as death, except,
I thought I heard above the coffee sloshin' in my cup
The far off, easy, pleasured sound of old friends catchin' up.


Used with authors permission from his column "On The Edge of Common Sense"

Coyote Cowboy Company
P.O. Box 2190
Benson, AZ 85602
(800) 654-2550
www.baxterblack.com
 
That was a fine tribute to your pal my friend. Baxter has the rare gift of humor and can still jerk your heart strings as easy as make ya laugh. Here's to all our cowboy compadres who have taken that last ride to the higher range. Thinkin' of you Dave. Be Blessed.
 
That was a nice thing for you to do in memory of your friend. I'll bet his family really appreciated you reading this fitting poem, written by Baxter Black, with your appropriate revisions. Thanks for sharing it with us.
 
sorry for your loss Gcreek, it's sad when the old guy's who forgot more about the ranching biz than most of us will ever know pass on. be happy that your freind took the time to mentor you. now i got to go do somthing about this dust in my eye,a very fitting poem by Baxter.
 
sorry for your loss,,it's funny tho how poetry can heal and smooth over a time and ease the process.
my poetry only comes to me as i'm thinking of the past,and surely from the heart.the poem was very fitting,and i'm sure the family and the author appreciated the time spent.
i have yet to write a poem about the future,,tears or otherwise....

thanks for sharing GCREEK
 
That poem is on one of my Baxter Black tapes, I've always liked it alot and it always brings a tear to my eyes. Sorry for your loss.
 

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